I lift weights
That make me go so down
And escaping a life time in hell,
I lift all the weights that sink me
And when you give me your power
To conquer my fears
I swim in the sea of doubts
And escaped my death
Now I am immortal
As long as you love me
I lift weights….
~ Dakshi ~
30/11/2015
How nice. But tbh I didn’t understand the context of the 2 lines “That make me go so down
And escaping a life time in hell,….”
It suggests moment of negativity…
OK let me read it again in that perspective