Do you Remember?

Do you know what day today?

Today, out of all days

I remember, do you remember as I do?

Amidst this cold, cold December

When all I need is a touch

How could you?

How could you just turn your back on me?

And go, just like that?

You think promises are meant to be broken?


( photo : :

For Poetry Picnic Week 18

Jingle Poetry At The Gooseberry Garden


Dakshi ~

2011 – 19/12

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10 Responses to Do you Remember?

  1. Pondering Prose says:

    Beautiful expression of pain.

  2. Summer says:

    sad, hopefully, he will turn around.


  3. sad 😦 the pic goes well with the tale as well 🙂

    happy gooseberry day!!!

  4. Poets Rally says:


    Hope all is well.

    Noting that you have won the perfect poet award for week 58,
    what an achievement, thanks for your outstanding contribution to us
    along the way, keep up the excellence. Best!

    Come join our poetry rallyby Friday if you wish to mingle and get inspired!

    A poem of your choice or a free verse is accepted.

    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

    Looking forward to seeing you share.
    Respect and hugs.

  5. bajanpoet says:

    Damn this was simple but poignant. Especially since I know several friends nursing this same exact hurt right now…. Well done.

  6. Morning says:

    perfect expression.

  7. Wolf says:

    ” This was just meant to be
    You are coming back to me
    ‘cause, this is pure love. “

  8. benjamin says:

    no i don’t think promises should be broken, some people forget that they have even made promises, some people blame it on the circumstances, but the fact is that if you make a promise you should keep it…even something like i will call u tomorrow, i will check up on you, i will always be there for you, if you cannot keep promises you shouldn’t make any, a word is a word, you cannot blame on anything else for being egoistic or slack….

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