When loneliness trying to surrender me in
And when my inner fire is becoming colder
Do I have any choice, but to give up?
When everything around me
Is gloomier and darker, than it used to be
Do I have a choice but to give up?
I stand in rain, alone
Drenched in loneliness
With mud patches on me
How I feel half the person I used to be, without you
The rain reminds me
Of a warmth I cannot have
A warmth I long, but unable to hold
I decided to get soak in the rain, so I could hide all my tears …
For Short Story Slam Week 16
( photo : :http://www.in-public.com/TrentParke/image/1497)
~ Dakshi ~
2011 – 13/12
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The Wanderer's Thoughts... 
Such a powerful poem. I just want to give you a hug. *hug*
cool one, let the rain wash away some pain, let your day start to sing,
smiles.
good luck!
. Someplace I’ve been before. Nothing like the rain to confided, sometimes to help me see clear at times.
Really felt myself wrapped in to your words…superb…Thanks for share dakshi..