Alone in the Rain…

When loneliness trying to surrender me in

And when my inner fire is becoming colder

Do I have any choice, but to give up?

When everything around me

Is gloomier and darker, than it used to be

Do I have a choice but to give up?

I stand in rain, alone

Drenched in loneliness

With mud patches on me

How I feel half the person I used to be, without you

The rain reminds me

Of  a warmth I cannot have

A warmth I long, but unable to hold

I decided to get soak in the rain, so I could hide all my tears …


For Short Story Slam Week 16


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Dakshi ~

2011 – 13/12

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4 Responses to Alone in the Rain…

  1. Joanna says:

    Such a powerful poem. I just want to give you a hug. *hug*

  2. Morning says:

    cool one, let the rain wash away some pain, let your day start to sing,

    good luck!

  3. leah J. Lynn says:

    . Someplace I’ve been before. Nothing like the rain to confided, sometimes to help me see clear at times.

  4. pure2core says:

    Really felt myself wrapped in to your words…superb…Thanks for share dakshi..

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