Lost amidst no where
To go or not to go
I thought,
looking at either side
Not a glimpse of hope
No single soul
Not even a bird in the sky
Silence killing my soul
Killing me softly with this empty space
Melancholy trying to embrace me
Solitary walks ahead of me…
~ © Dakshi ~
2011 – 17/08
All Rights Reserved
The Wanderer's Thoughts... 
solitary walks ahead of me… I like this last line… It means much more that it says…It rings on me…
Vivid words to describe what you see in this picture prompt. Nicely done.
My story for week 8: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/amber-waves-of-grain/
well captured situations in the prompt…
love it.
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kind of haunting,
well done.
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It started …zooop… and got end… excellet display of emotion.. well written…
There’s a deep sense of isolation … of loss … not certain of the way forward … ?
Wow! You in my mind are now tied for my favorite! This captured a feeling that was very much so true…. Great write:)
focused and powerful expression.
well done.
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very nice… sad and somber—which isn’t always a bad thing 🙂