Your Heartbeat…

I woke up from my sleep without heart burns and sighs,

I Was in a melancholic mood before,

We were worlds apart,

The very thought of You made my eye dim,

With tears I cannot shed,

You are far far away,

Million light years away,

All I have is a memory,

Of today and yesterday

But sleep soothed my soul,

Neutralized my wild fire,

Made me realize that my Love is stronger and deeper,

For me to live another day,

I have become mellow and I feel I can go on till the end of times,

Time and distance immaterial,

Since I feel your heartbeat in mine

© 2011 July – All Rights Reserved

Dakshi

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8 Responses to Your Heartbeat…

  1. Rebecca Ell says:

    I like this poem, but do try not to use the comma too much as it masks the true beauty of the words and makes it fussy. I hope you don’t think I say this to be rude – the words are beautiful. Well done 🙂

  2. Jingle says:

    agreed, divine imagery, smiles.

  3. Dakshi says:

    Thanx Becca and Jin.. 🙂
    No worries..

  4. A very pleasant read. Smooth and eloquent.

  5. I love that line, beautiful poem and I agree with Charles wonderful flow

  6. mbwilliams says:

    sleep is so powerful isn’t it, and so is this poem

  7. I loved this. Very poignant 🙂

  8. A very intense and beautiful communication of love in emotion, poetry and picture.

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