The Seed of Love…

The seed of love,

That you have planted in my heart,

Seem to be growing,

Under your scrutiny,

You know what’s best for me,

Since you are and always will be my eternal sunshine…

 (Written for Thursday Short Story Slam Week 5 children’s Literature )

© 2011 July – All Rights Reserved

Dakshi

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14 Responses to The Seed of Love…

  1. Awww this is so sweet =)

  2. dani says:

    “Since you are and always will be my eternal sunshine…”

    sooooo lovely! ♥

  3. Wolf says:

    Love……is great.

  4. again a very great piece. I have been searching for a way to create a children poem… Love the words and the image to go with it. You are very talented (sure you always hear that but truth from where i stand)

  5. I love this! Children absolutely plant love in our hearts. I’ve always called my son my “sunshine” also. Lovely poem.

  6. Jingle says:

    The seed of love,

    That you have planted in my heart,

    Seem to be growing,

    Under your scrutiny,

    love it, brilliant metaphor. short and perfect.
    😉

  7. kez says:

    How lovely and like a seed, love grows and grows …thank you for sharing

  8. A.B. Thomas says:

    nicely done – it may be just me but it can be read as hopeful or desperate, brilliantly done!

  9. mish says:

    It is that sense of protection and knowledge that there is that someone who always “has your back” and is looking out for you !

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