Space….

You have said you need space,

Take as much time as you need,

It’s all yours, who I am to complain?

It’s a fact that I miss, since it’s not just another friend,

So have some space,

As you please,

Have some space…

No two people are alike,

I admit with no regret,

I do not have any doubt in what you say,

But just because life’s hard,

It’s unfair to be mad,

On the entire human race,

Those who care,

And who understands.

But if you need time,

More and more space and time,

Take all as much as you please,

I would still be there,

Would not grumble, I still care,

I would there where you have left me,

Knowing very well, that you would not miss

Have more space,

As you please,

Have some space….

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7 Responses to Space….

  1. Olivia says:

    I guess it’s writing that has connected all of us in this Cyber Space..
    This one, is so meaningful.. I relate to it pretty close.. very well composed.. so intense and yet so eloquently expressed..
    Very well done Dakshi..

  2. Jingle says:

    lovely rhymes,
    love the imagery.
    beautiful write.

  3. Jingle says:

    Please help giving (belated) birthday wishes to 3 or 4 fellow poets:

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/03/happy-birthday-eric-dom/

    Thanks a lot for the support.
    Happy November!
    Your presence adds light to our space, keep shining!
    xxx

  4. tasithoughts says:

    Very well done. Really loved the layered meaning.

    Happy belated birthday!

    JP

  5. Shashi says:

    Dear Dakshi
    Happy Birthday….

    May
    Every sunrise
    Bring you light from the past
    Every sunset
    Bring you the bouquet of stars
    Every friend
    Give you their strength of love

    May you have great times ahead…

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

  6. Shashi says:

    I relate this to more personally.. been there too. I feel that love in itself is a great thing and does not need reciprocity but lust does. Hence I like that you are still there whether the love of life is there or not…
    I liked the verse so much…

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

  7. Sumit Sarkar says:

    “But if you need time,
    More and more space and time,
    Take all as much as you please,
    I would still be there,
    Would not grumble, I still care”..

    Very touching 🙂

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