Memories…

Rain is pouring hard

Sky is gloomy and dark

Rain brought back memories

Which made her feel melancholic

And her thoughts went back to past

A past where she used to

Love the rain

Her heart danced in a merrier tune

As she remembered how he used to come

With his big umbrella,

And how he squeezed her under it,

With his big, warm hands,

How they walk along the roadway,

How she felt his warmth,

As he put his big warm hands,

Around her cold shoulders,

 He was so considerate,

He treated her as if she is a delicate flower,

Her heart was glowing just by that thought,

But how things have changed,

How things were and are,

She hardly remembers a day,

Where both of them shared anything,

As now they are ‘ happily married’,

A wonderful couple, a match made in heaven,

To many,

They can afford all the luxuries,

Chauffeurs, fancy cars,

Expensive dresses, flying around the world,

He is a busy body, who hardly has time for her,

They hardly speak, they hardly meet,

Life goes on, on and on,

She never complain as it is not her way,

She has lost the man once she was madly in love with

Rain brought back memories,

Memories she remembered with tears,

A past where everything was simple,

A past where she and he were together,

Together as ONE…

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15 Responses to Memories…

  1. Jingle says:

    love it,
    this is a mind blowing piece for me…
    Thanks for sharing!

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  3. I love the circle of this piece…sometimes things its better to leave certain things in their simple state…for who knows…A dialogue will do, if you ask me…instead of dying in silence or being forced to do otherwise.

    Nicely done, and you just made me reason with the poem…outstanding.

    Cheers!

  4. adkwriter15 says:

    Your piece tugged at my heart so much! I can feel the emotion coming through the words. Great job!

  5. Shashi says:

    enjoyed reading it.. lovely memories.. thanks for sharing…

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  6. viddhi says:

    beautiful..i can feel the emotions…!!
    gud job..
    keep writing..!!

  7. Dakshi says:

    Thank you all..

  8. I loved your poem. I think anyone that is married or has been can relate to some aspect of it.

  9. It seems like rain brings out the nostalgic in us, doesn’t it? I enjoyed your poetry.
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  10. dasuntoucha says:

    Funny how the rain can bring joy and pain at the same time…well written piece.

  11. fiveloaf says:

    enjoyed the story- thank you for sharing..

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  13. branchenbuch says:

    Man, talk about a fantastic post! I?ve stumbled across your blog a few times within the past, but I usually forgot to bookmark it. But not again! Thanks for posting the way you do, I genuinely appreciate seeing someone who actually has a viewpoint and isn?t really just bringing back up crap like nearly all other writers today. Keep it up!

  14. Avril Smith says:

    It was extremely interesting for me to read the post. Thanks for it. I like such topics and everything connected to them. I would like to read a bit more soon.

    Avril Smith
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