For the Short Story Slam week 7, had to use four or more words from the list
– safari, monkey, story, jungle, banana, jungle, beach and music -
This is my submission.
Would you come with me on a journey
To a safari to see a monkey
Wouldn’t it be a perfect story?
In the jungle where there would be those big bad wolves too?
Or should we just sit back, relaxing in the beach under a coconut tree
Where you would heal my soul with music of the silence between us?
~ © Dakshi ~
2011 – 04/08
All Rights Reserved
Short Story Slam Week 7:
http://bluebellbooks.blogspot.com/2011/08/thursday-short-story-slam-week-7.html







stunning wonders, enjoyed your imagination here,
well done.
Lovely piece of poetry
Well done. You surprised me at the end. Good one!
I loved your unexpected “music of the silence …” Well done !
I love this silence between us where i hear the thoughts that’s on your mind.
Oh, that was remarkable . . .
Wonderful! I love the photographs that accompany your piece
your entry draws readers right in, feel the scenes, superb writing.
Now that is some great writing.
GREAT WRITE UP